raluca Posted November 2, 2005 Posted November 2, 2005 http://rapidshare.de/files/7093086/Ralu-Ho...pella_.mp3.html this is a song i wrote last year for my best friend. i wan't to make her a surprize but i really don't like the sound of my voice on my songs so i need to know what you guys think of it. here are the lyrics in case you don't understand something HOME BETWEEN THE STARS When two hearts meet in one dreamAnd don't want to fall apartYou don't have another choiceJust to let them liveIn a world where only love is If you ever feel lonely and lostIn the journey that your heart has begunLet your worries come to meAnd you will see what a friend you have won Chorus:Cause if we take our handsAnd spread our wings and flyWe will always find a shelter in the skyAnd if the world tries to breack our heartsWe'll make our friendship home between the stars And all the widest oceansAnd all the highest cloudsWon't be able to destroyThe friendship that we have Chrous:x2 Quote J'aimerais tant savoir Souffler comme le vent Sur ton doux visage Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps Casser les nuages Parler même tout bas Juste pout toi et moi De petits riens Mais là-bas Au loin, tu nages... http://static.eventful.com/store/stickers/flash/assets/split/300x45_mid-black.gifhttp://static.eventful.com/store/stickers/flash/assets/split/300x30_bottom-black.gifView all Bucharest events at Eventful
seahawk Posted November 14, 2005 Posted November 14, 2005 Raluca, this is very beautiful!!! Congratulations!!!I really like it, just imagine this with instruments, choir...... very very very good!!!!! Quote
raluca Posted November 19, 2005 Author Posted November 19, 2005 thanks i thought it was bad since no one put their comments Quote J'aimerais tant savoir Souffler comme le vent Sur ton doux visage Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps Casser les nuages Parler même tout bas Juste pout toi et moi De petits riens Mais là-bas Au loin, tu nages... http://static.eventful.com/store/stickers/flash/assets/split/300x45_mid-black.gifhttp://static.eventful.com/store/stickers/flash/assets/split/300x30_bottom-black.gifView all Bucharest events at Eventful
seahawk Posted November 19, 2005 Posted November 19, 2005 thanks i thought it was bad since no one put their comments<{POST_SNAPBACK}> It is really beautiful, I just saw a little late the post! Quote
Krys Posted November 20, 2005 Posted November 20, 2005 sorry ma friend! i was a little lazy to check CCI well i thought it was nice. i told you before love the lyrics gurl! Quote
VanMerlin Posted November 21, 2005 Posted November 21, 2005 The lyrics are nice and the melody is 'power ballade' style. The only critique I'll give you is to watch your pitch (which is hard when you're singing a capella...trust me I know), and to try and learn to sing from your diaphragm instead of your throat, so you don't sound like you're straining or "yelling". Your chorus is in such a high range that it would cause even the greatest singers to strain...because it's high all the way through and requires a constant effort for an extended period of time. You may even consider keeping the chorus low for the first two times and then exploding with that euphoric power in that high range for the last time. It is a very charming, very attractive song. Keep up the creativity, Raluca. You're doing great. Quote
raluca Posted November 22, 2005 Author Posted November 22, 2005 The lyrics are nice and the melody is 'power ballade' style. The only critique I'll give you is to watch your pitch (which is hard when you're singing a capella...trust me I know), and to try and learn to sing from your diaphragm instead of your throat, so you don't sound like you're straining or "yelling". Your chorus is in such a high range that it would cause even the greatest singers to strain...because it's high all the way through and requires a constant effort for an extended period of time. You may even consider keeping the chorus low for the first two times and then exploding with that euphoric power in that high range for the last time. It is a very charming, very attractive song. Keep up the creativity, Raluca. You're doing great.<{POST_SNAPBACK}> thanks for your comment! i figured that the chorus is too high i'll re-record it lower Quote J'aimerais tant savoir Souffler comme le vent Sur ton doux visage Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps Casser les nuages Parler même tout bas Juste pout toi et moi De petits riens Mais là-bas Au loin, tu nages... http://static.eventful.com/store/stickers/flash/assets/split/300x45_mid-black.gifhttp://static.eventful.com/store/stickers/flash/assets/split/300x30_bottom-black.gifView all Bucharest events at Eventful
raluca Posted November 22, 2005 Author Posted November 22, 2005 i think i did it listen and judge..but the "wind" is still there http://rapidshare.de/files/7996667/Ralu-Ho...ion_2_.mp3.html Quote J'aimerais tant savoir Souffler comme le vent Sur ton doux visage Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps Casser les nuages Parler même tout bas Juste pout toi et moi De petits riens Mais là-bas Au loin, tu nages... http://static.eventful.com/store/stickers/flash/assets/split/300x45_mid-black.gifhttp://static.eventful.com/store/stickers/flash/assets/split/300x30_bottom-black.gifView all Bucharest events at Eventful
VanMerlin Posted November 24, 2005 Posted November 24, 2005 The second attempt is MUCH better. It is much more suited to your voice, and the lower range makes it sound a great deal more tender and brings out the melody...which is what you want for that song, right? Good job. Quote
raluca Posted November 24, 2005 Author Posted November 24, 2005 The second attempt is MUCH better. It is much more suited to your voice, and the lower range makes it sound a great deal more tender and brings out the melody...which is what you want for that song, right? Good job.<{POST_SNAPBACK}> thanks Quote J'aimerais tant savoir Souffler comme le vent Sur ton doux visage Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps Casser les nuages Parler même tout bas Juste pout toi et moi De petits riens Mais là-bas Au loin, tu nages... http://static.eventful.com/store/stickers/flash/assets/split/300x45_mid-black.gifhttp://static.eventful.com/store/stickers/flash/assets/split/300x30_bottom-black.gifView all Bucharest events at Eventful
Pearlvoice Posted November 27, 2005 Posted November 27, 2005 It is G R E A T !!!!!!! Your friend must've fainted when you presented it to him/her.Absolutely beautiful. Love,Christine Quote
raluca Posted November 27, 2005 Author Posted November 27, 2005 It is G R E A T !!!!!!! Your friend must've fainted when you presented it to him/her.Absolutely beautiful. Love,Christine<{POST_SNAPBACK}> thank you yeah she really loved it i really didn't expected her to like it so much Quote J'aimerais tant savoir Souffler comme le vent Sur ton doux visage Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps Casser les nuages Parler même tout bas Juste pout toi et moi De petits riens Mais là-bas Au loin, tu nages... http://static.eventful.com/store/stickers/flash/assets/split/300x45_mid-black.gifhttp://static.eventful.com/store/stickers/flash/assets/split/300x30_bottom-black.gifView all Bucharest events at Eventful
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