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hello all, this is a song of my voice, i hope u'll like it, plz write for me ur opinions... :)

waiting ;)

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:down: 43 reviews, and NO COMMENT? :confused1:

y,u didn't like it??? :(

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:thumbsup2: Hi Pepsi,

 

I downloaded your song for the first time tonight, I noticed it had only been downloaded 8 times before me, so don't be too disappointed, it's not like 45 people downloaded it and then ignored it. So please don't be too sad! :flowers:

 

Now then, your song... I must say that first of all, that is not an easy song to make your own, and to record it with out any music is very brave. Singing acappella is like baring your soul! Good for you! :thumbsup2: You do have a very smooth voice, it has a nice texture to it. But I think you could make it even better! I think if you don't have any music you need to create a beat, because at some points in the song you seemed to slow down, and it made the song sound very sad. Another point I'd like to make is that you needed to smile when you sang it. Did you realise you were singing about a WONDERFUL world? you sounded so sad, like you were going to cry. Don't get me wrong, I love hearing emotion, but it's not a sad song, it's a happy song, it's supposed to give hope and inspiration. By the end of it, I felt quite worried about you, I thought "this guy really needs a hug!" :cry:

 

I would also like you to listen to Louis Armstrong's version. The version you sang just sounded like you were trying to mimic Celine, I don't want to hear Celine, I want to hear YOU! :w00t: I can put my cd player on if I want to hear Celine! So I would say, listen to Louis version, feel the song and go where it takes you, not just where Celine went with it. (Even though you got Celine's performance really well!)

 

I will now go and see if you have more songs to download here, as I really want to see what else you have had a go at, but be warned, if you try and sing all your songs like Celine, I'll be coming to get ya! :msn-wink: I want to hear a song in the style of Pepsi, NOT in the style of Celine Dion! :clap: :thumbsup2:

 

Love Lisa

xxx

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