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i just wrote a song thinking about waht celine said at larry king for the people that need help. here it is:

 

LIVING ON A PRAYER

 

When time comes

For people to stand for each other

We try to give out best

And try to make it further

 

We're not thinking with our mind

We are talking with our heart

All we need is to believe

That we can from beginning start

 

Chorus:

Living on a prayer

Taht cries out with our tears

We can't just stay and watch

How they can't fight their fears

We must put hand to hand

Let's join from all the world

And start making a difference

Not speak just empty words

 

Let's give them a chance

To be able to live again

Cause we can call us human

When we release them from the pain

 

Chorus:...

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted
Very beautiful. I wish I could write a song based on what Céline said, but I haven't seen the video because it's too big for me to download. Could you tell me what Céline said about the hurricane?
Posted
Very beautiful.  I wish I could write a song based on what Céline said, but I haven't seen the video because it's too big for me to download.  Could you tell me what Céline said about the hurricane?

 

 

you can read her speech at celine disscusion.

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted
woow..Good job :thumbsup2:

"Today, I’m a person on a path of connecting with my source and understanding that I am on the leading edge of creation.."

Posted
do you guys think celine would like the song if she would be able to read it? i mean i don't want her to sing it...well i do....bit i didn't write it for that

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted
I think maybe you should record it since it's your song. I do want Céline to sing it, but since you wrote it I think you should do the honors and sing it.
Posted
i don't care, i only want celine to read it and it seems like she will! :w00t:

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted

Here's my song. Hope you like it.

 

"I'm Thirsty"

By: Dana P. Covert

 

Verse 1:

I'm thirst so bad

I want my life back to normal

I want to live a normal life

I need my family back

 

Chorus:

I'm thirsty for LOVE

I'm thirsty for LIFE

I'm thirsty for my city

I'm thirsty for GOD

I'm thirsty

 

Verse 2:

I need my friends

I need my children

I want to see things back to normal

I'm thirsty

 

Chorus repeat(x4)

 

Verse 3:

I want people to help

I want relief efforts

I want GOD to care

 

Chorus repeat(x3)

 

Copyright September 7,2005

 

This song is dedicated to the victims of the hurricane affected areas in the gulf coast.

Posted
i don't care, i only want celine to read it and it seems like she will! :w00t:

 

 

Have you sent it to Céline since you said it seems like she will read it and LOVE it?

Posted
i don't care, i only want celine to read it and it seems like she will! :w00t:

 

 

Have you sent it to Céline since you said it seems like she will read it and LOVE it?

 

 

:laughing: it's a secret! :whistling1:

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted
Here's my song.  Hope you like it.

 

"I'm Thirsty"

By: Dana P.  Covert

 

Verse 1:

I'm thirst so bad

I want my life back to normal

I want to live a normal life

I need my family back

 

Chorus:

I'm thirsty for LOVE

I'm thirsty for LIFE

I'm thirsty for my city

I'm thirsty for GOD

I'm thirsty

 

Verse 2:

I need my friends

I need my children

I want to see things back to normal

I'm thirsty

 

Chorus repeat(x4)

 

Verse 3:

I want people to help

I want relief efforts

I want GOD to care

 

Chorus repeat(x3)

 

Copyright September 7,2005

 

This song is dedicated to the victims of the hurricane affected areas in the gulf coast.

 

 

i like it! :thumbsup2:

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted
What do you like about my song? What I like about your song is that it says everything that the victims are thinking about.
Posted
i think that the name is very interesting judging byt the fact that they need water, but you made it more special and wrote that there's more than water that they need! :clap:

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted
That's my point. I wanted to express the fact that they need more than water, as you said. I hope I have made my point very well in this song.
Posted
Here's my song.  Hope you like it.

 

"I'm Thirsty"

By: Dana P.  Covert

 

Verse 1:

I'm thirst so bad

I want my life back to normal

I want to live a normal life

I need my family back

 

Chorus:

I'm thirsty for LOVE

I'm thirsty for LIFE

I'm thirsty for my city

I'm thirsty for GOD

I'm thirsty

 

Verse 2:

I need my friends

I need my children

I want to see things back to normal

I'm thirsty

 

Chorus repeat(x4)

 

Verse 3:

I want people to help

I want relief efforts

I want GOD to care

 

Chorus repeat(x3)

 

Copyright September 7,2005

 

This song is dedicated to the victims of the hurricane affected areas in the gulf coast.

 

 

i like it! :thumbsup2:

 

 

 

 

This song has a special meaning to me. It is my first song that I wrote that had to do with a natural disaster. I hope that I can record it and have you guys listen to it and tell me what you think.

  • 3 weeks later...
Posted
That's cool,I hope you will record it
http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee107/lotr_mondragon/00000000000002406360-300x300_72dpi_.jpg
Posted

well i'll try :D

 

P.S.:Claus your signature is toooooo big! :msn-tongue:

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

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