''my wish of prayer''

[kristen]

my wish of prayer

 

 

 

 

i pray apon the wish that you are coming home so soon,

and hope you know the love i feel when i look at you,

for you are something special,not forrgotten by the wind,

and forever this is how it must be,

the treasure of you within,

and knowing that i had you once,

is enough to know for sure,

that when i hold you in my arms,

that's all i need,that's all''

 

 

 

written by me, krissy-ten hope you like my wish of prayer!!!!

Edited August 17, 2005 at 04:29 AM by kristen

[1Celine12]

That's true about loved ones also. This one sounds like something Céline would have said to Karine before she died in Céline's arms. GREAT job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[kristen]

That's true about loved ones also.  This one sounds like something Céline would have said to Karine before she died in Céline's arms.  GREAT job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

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thax for replying to my poems it is nice to know that someone likes my work love your new friend kristen

[1Celine12]

You're very welcome. It's always nice to see people writing something original, not something they copied from a book. Great job.

[raluca]

  my wish of prayer

 

 

 

 

i pray apon the wish that you are coming home so soon,

and hope you know the love i feel when i  look at you,

for you are something special,not forrgotten by the wind,

and forever this is how it  must be,

the treasure of you within,

and knowing that i had you once,

is enough to know for sure,

that when i hold you in my arms,

that's all i need,that's all''

 

 

 

written  by  me, krissy-ten hope you like  my  wish of prayer!!!!

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i really love what you've written! it's so cool! i love reading things that other wrote...god i love english! i'm romanian,but i can;t express myself so good in romanian like in english

[1Celine12]

Maybe you should study english for a while and you will get better. I also LOVE to read what others write.

[raluca]

Maybe you should study english for a while and you will get better.  I also LOVE to read what others write.

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believe me i'm studying english for almost 8 years...it's better every day

[1Celine12]

That's good. Keep it up and you will get better everyday.

[raluca]

That's good.  Keep it up and you will get better everyday.

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don't worry! that's what i want!

[1Celine12]

I think that's what we all want is to get better at our talents and career. You sound like Céline. You may not think you do, but I do and if your friends think so, then be happy that they care. Keep up the GREAT work on you angelic voice.

[raluca]

thanks for the advice. i sound like Celine? maybe... about my "angelic" voice...well not everyone thinks the same like you..but thanks anyway! i love to sing...but it's a hobby

[1Celine12]

I'm trying to give you the courage to keep going on your hobby. Maybe someday you can have this is a career.