"Thank You My Dear Sweet Friends"

August 15, 2005 at 10:33 PM

Raluca, here's my thank you song for you to look over. Hope you like it.

By Dana P. Covert

Verse 1: I want to thank my friends for being there

through thick and thin

I want to say I LOVE you from the bottom of my heart

I want to say thank you for giving me the courage to follow my dreams

Chorus: Thank You My Dear Sweet Friends

for listening to my problems

Thank You My Dear Sweet Friends

for caring about me

Thank You My Dear Sweet Friends

For seeing me through the tough times

Verse 2: I want to say thank you

for being my dear sweet friends

I want to say thank you

for being there when I needed you the most

Chorus Repeat 2x's

Thank You My Dear Sweet Friends 3x's

Copyright August 15,2005

Tell me what you think. And please be honest. I can take the critizism.

August 16, 2005 at 06:56 AM

that song is very cool! :clap:

i love it! you see? your songs become better and better! :thumbsup2: just like i told you! so keep on writting! :kicking:

P.S. Please try not to compare your songs with anyone,cause everybody has its own way of writting. You'll get depressed,i tell you from my own experience!

August 16, 2005 at 04:03 PM

What do you mean try not to compare my songs to anyone? I don't get it. Please explain.

August 16, 2005 at 07:57 PM

What do you mean try not to compare my songs to anyone? I don't get it. Please explain.
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well...for example when i was a beginer(i write songs for a year and a half..wow! it has benn so long :whistling1: ) i used to compare myself with diane warren and i used to get depressed cause i though that she writes so goog and i will never be able to write good songs..that's what i meant :thumbsup2:

August 16, 2005 at 08:50 PM

When have I compared myself to someone? I don't remember me doing that. I have been writing since May 7 of this year and I feel that I am doing better since I wrote "Ask GOD" as my first song. Do you want me to post that song so you can see what a beginner can do. I never compare myself to anyone, because I know I can't be like other songwriters. I am my own songwriter and I can do my own thing.

August 17, 2005 at 04:26 AM

"Ask GOD"

Lyrics By Dana P. Covert

Music By Sam From Syria

Verse 1: I came to GOD looking for goodness

Said I can't be mean anymore [i said I can't be mean anymore]or ;cause I can't]

I asked Him to come shine on my life

And be the one that I love most

Chorus 1: All I have to do is ask GOD

And then He will listen to me

If I keep asking, He'll keep doing

all I have to do is ask GOD

Verse2: I know that GOD loves me

He'll always be with me

When I ask, I should be patient

And then He'll answer me

Chorus2: All you have to do is ask GOD

And then He will listen to you

If you keep asking, He'll keep doing

All you have to do is ask GOD

Chorus3: All we have to do is ask GOD

And then He will listen to us

If we keep asking, He'll keep doing

All we have to do is ask GOD

Tell me what you think after reading my very first song. I hope you like it.

August 18, 2005 at 11:33 AM

"Ask GOD"
Lyrics By Dana P. Covert
Music By Sam From Syria

Verse 1: I came to GOD looking for goodness
Said I can't be mean anymore [i said I can't be mean anymore]or ;cause I can't]
I asked Him to come shine on my life
And be the one that I love most

Chorus 1: All I have to do is ask GOD
And then He will listen to me
If I keep asking, He'll keep doing
all I have to do is ask GOD

Verse2: I know that GOD loves me
He'll always be with me
When I ask, I should be patient
And then He'll answer me

Chorus2: All you have to do is ask GOD
And then He will listen to you
If you keep asking, He'll keep doing
All you have to do is ask GOD

Chorus3: All we have to do is ask GOD
And then He will listen to us
If we keep asking, He'll keep doing
All we have to do is ask GOD

Tell me what you think after reading my very first song. I hope you like it.
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that's your first song? :shocking: OMG! it's so much better that my first song :lmao: i really like it and i would love to listen to it! :thumbsup2:

BTW,i never said you compared yourself with other songwriters,i just gave you a piece of advice...i used to compare myself..and it's not such a great idea...like you said...we do our own things! :thumbsup2:

August 18, 2005 at 03:03 PM

Those lyrics are pretty nice.....And you know what? While reading this, I even had some kind of melody in my head.....There's no particular reason for this, it was just there :blushing:

August 18, 2005 at 04:40 PM

"Ask GOD"
Lyrics By Dana P. Covert
Music By Sam From Syria

Verse 1: I came to GOD looking for goodness
Said I can't be mean anymore [i said I can't be mean anymore]or ;cause I can't]
I asked Him to come shine on my life
And be the one that I love most

Chorus 1: All I have to do is ask GOD
And then He will listen to me
If I keep asking, He'll keep doing
all I have to do is ask GOD

Verse2: I know that GOD loves me
He'll always be with me
When I ask, I should be patient
And then He'll answer me

Chorus2: All you have to do is ask GOD
And then He will listen to you
If you keep asking, He'll keep doing
All you have to do is ask GOD

Chorus3: All we have to do is ask GOD
And then He will listen to us
If we keep asking, He'll keep doing
All we have to do is ask GOD

Tell me what you think after reading my very first song. I hope you like it.
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that's your first song? OMG! it's so much better that my first song i really like it and i would love to listen to it!

BTW,i never said you compared yourself with other songwriters,i just gave you a piece of advice...i used to compare myself..and it's not such a great idea...like you said...we do our own things!
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Thanks for the advice. And thanks for liking my first song.

August 19, 2005 at 01:57 PM

"Ask GOD"
Lyrics By Dana P. Covert
Music By Sam From Syria

Verse 1: I came to GOD looking for goodness
Said I can't be mean anymore [i said I can't be mean anymore]or ;cause I can't]
I asked Him to come shine on my life
And be the one that I love most

Chorus 1: All I have to do is ask GOD
And then He will listen to me
If I keep asking, He'll keep doing
all I have to do is ask GOD

Verse2: I know that GOD loves me
He'll always be with me
When I ask, I should be patient
And then He'll answer me

Chorus2: All you have to do is ask GOD
And then He will listen to you
If you keep asking, He'll keep doing
All you have to do is ask GOD

Chorus3: All we have to do is ask GOD
And then He will listen to us
If we keep asking, He'll keep doing
All we have to do is ask GOD

Tell me what you think after reading my very first song. I hope you like it.
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that's your first song? OMG! it's so much better that my first song i really like it and i would love to listen to it!

BTW,i never said you compared yourself with other songwriters,i just gave you a piece of advice...i used to compare myself..and it's not such a great idea...like you said...we do our own things!
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May I ask what the name of your first song is called and if you could post it so I can compare it to my first song? I would really LOVE to read it.

August 19, 2005 at 07:41 PM

i'm sorry but my first song doesn't exist anymore :cry:

i don't know where i put the notebook i wrote it...and the refrain from it i put it to another song....sorry! it's name was "if i could"...but i could post the first song i wrote and i have it. it's called "i just wanna be free"...i guess :lmao:

i can't remember well

August 20, 2005 at 05:07 AM

If you have it written down I would LOVE to have a copy so I can add it to my collection of songs written by my online friends. If not, that's okay also. If you do have it please post it for me.

August 20, 2005 at 09:09 AM

OMG! :w00t: i found my very first song! but...remember it's my first! :shy: it's not so good...

IF I COULD

If I could run away

From every single moment I ever feared

If I could listen to what you say

And never think that we were never here

If I could kiss the moon

In every single way you ask me to

If I could catch the stars

Just to know I'll be with you

If I could take the planet Mars

To bring it staright to you

I'll do everything

just to be with you

Refrain:Just close your eyes

To be together

In every single moment

Of our lives

Just touch my lips

And never leave them

And so I know

You'll always be

Right there by my side

Have you ever tryed

To make someone love you?

Have you ever tryed

To make people laugh?

Have you ever tryed

To whisper to stars

Every single night

And tell them to take me

Right by your side?

Refrain:...

GOD! :lmao: :lmao: :lmao: what was i thinking? :lmao:

August 20, 2005 at 07:02 PM

All you need is the instrumental to the Céline song "If I Could" and you'll be set. I think it's as beautiful as my first song, if not, more beautiful. Thanks for the beautiful lyrics. You go girl. :clap:

August 22, 2005 at 08:31 AM

All you need is the instrumental to the Céline song "If I Could" and you'll be set. I think it's as beautiful as my first song, if not, more beautiful. Thanks for the beautiful lyrics. You go girl.
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thank you! :flowers:

August 22, 2005 at 04:42 PM

You're welcome. I try to give positive feedback, that's all.

August 25, 2005 at 07:47 PM

"The Love Of My Life"

By Dana P. Covert

Verse1: The love of my life

The love of my life is a good place to live

The love of my life is a good set of clothes

The love of my life is a good pillow to cry into

When the times get too rough and unbearable

Chorus: The love of my life is a good friend

So I can share my thoughts and feelings with

The love of my life is someone who cares about me deeply

The love of my life is to have my family close by

Verse 2: The love of my life is a Céline Dion cd

The love of my life is a good meal to eat

The love of my life is a shoulder to cry on

when I feel like giving up

The love of my life is a good book to read

Chorus repeat...

Tag: The love of my life is you GOD.

This song was very hard to write. So please tell me what you think.

August 26, 2005 at 08:47 AM

wow! i like it! i specially love this lyric: "The love of my life is a Céline Dion cd" :wub:

August 26, 2005 at 02:08 PM

wow! i like it! i specially love this lyric: "The love of my life is a Céline Dion cd"
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The first part should be The love of my life, not The love of my lide. If someone can correct that that would be great.

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