celinemagicsingle Posted December 10, 2009 at 10:01 PM Posted December 10, 2009 at 10:01 PM Hola chicos , les traigo la letra de una canción que he compuesto Espero que les guste, es muy simple, pero es la primera que escribo, bueno , lo dicho TOMORROW PRIMER VERSO When I wake up everydayI ask to me, why aren't youby my side. Why aren't you by my side?And I think ESTRIBILLO TomorrowTomorrowTomorrow willbe the daythe day which myDreams will come true INSTRUMENTAL SEGUNDO VERSO When I go to schooleveryday, I tell to meWhat are you waiting for? Why aren't you by my side?and I think ESTRIBILLO """"""""""PUENTE + INSTRUMENTAL Today will be the day whichI gonna tell you that I am inlove with you ESTRIBILLO (Bis) FINALtomorrowtomorrow (suspiro) Quote
celínico_sin_remedio Posted December 11, 2009 at 06:13 AM Posted December 11, 2009 at 06:13 AM No sabía que componías Manu! Pero si me permites te voy a corregir unos errores de gramática en el inglés PRIMER VERSO Sería: PRIMER VERSO Lo que he puesto en rojo es lo corregido. Lo que pasa es que tiene demasiados estribillos y resultaría muy repetitiva. Te aconsejo quitar algunos. De todas formas, tienes la melodía? Y muchas gracias por compartirla! When I Wake up every day, I wonder, why aren't you by my sideWhy aren't you by my sideAnd I think ESTRIBILLO TomorrowTomorrowTomorrow will be the daythe day when my dreams will come true INSTRUMENTAL SEGUNDO VERSO When I go to schoolevery day, I thinkwhat are you waiting for?Why aren't you by my sideand I think ESTRIBILLO PUENTE + INSTRUMENTAL Today will be the day whenI'm gonna tell you I am in love with you ESTRIBILLO (bis) FINAL Tomorrowtomorrow (suspiro) When I wake up everydayI ask to me, why aren't youby my side. Why aren't you by my side?And I think ESTRIBILLO TomorrowTomorrowTomorrow willbe the daythe day which myDreams will come true INSTRUMENTAL SEGUNDO VERSO When I go to schooleveryday, I tell to meWhat are you waiting for? Why aren't you by my side?and I think ESTRIBILLO """"""""""PUENTE + INSTRUMENTAL Today will be the day whichI gonna tell you that I am inlove with you ESTRIBILLO (Bis) FINALtomorrowtomorrow (suspiro) Quote "No matter where you are, reach for your own star to realize the power of the dream" From miss Céline Dion to the world those with a will to listen, and not just hear
celinemagicsingle Posted December 24, 2009 at 12:48 AM Author Posted December 24, 2009 at 12:48 AM Gracias por la corrección Antonio Post 700! Al fin, ya era hora Quote
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