What do you guys think of my poem?

[Raevaz]

Well I had to write a poem for school, but we did this process where we narrow things down to a specific topic and I was limited on writing which is why I wasn't able to write about anything I want, and we had certain guidelines, so this is my best I did with what I had...

 

Faces, show peace and power

Faces, are beautiful like a flower.

 

Faces, can show an expressive emotion,

Which can be calm or strong like an ocean.

 

Faces, they show our ranging races,

Which come from different places.

 

Our faces, they’re real and random,

And they can show our wisdom.

 

Faces, they can be friendly or fearful,

And this is why they can tell a lot about people.

[Jacqui]

I think it's good!!! Well done.

[Charlie92]

It's really good I agree with the aussie

[CelineforEva]

Really nice

[Bell]

I like the idea very much!

[Raevaz]

thanks everyone!!