celinerific Posted January 8, 2009 at 05:24 AM Posted January 8, 2009 at 05:24 AM (edited) Okay... Apparently our English exam is going to be based on poetry, so our teacher had us each write a poem about a memory we had. So, as you all might guess - crazy Celine fans choose crazy Celine moments to write about. So, here's the one that I wrote. It goes in the AA BB CC DD EE (etc...) rhyming structure. Anyhoo... Enjoy and let me know what you think! (I know... my title couldn't be more original. Give me a break, after trying to rhyme all that poopie-sh!t, I deserve a break from creativeness. ) Taking Chances with Celine DionBy: Erika Tran ENG3U1-09 Late into a day of a warm summer solstice,keys I had possessed to a being I have loved for so long,a special, talented chanteuse with a name, Celine Dion. Not to be tardy, we arrived two numbers beforeand memorabilia I had bought, but still I longed for more.As fans passed before me, I wore my new shirt proud.It bared the face of my love and put me on a cloud. A chamber I had entered with seats I could not count.A table in the centre, my heart had not a doubt.Dark silk enveloped the air as the stars began to dim.With a silence so pure I could hear one drop a pin.Several moments passed as the big screens came aglow.A voice in the distance - it was time to start the show. An angel sound I heard. It was her without a lie.I danced, I sang, I cheered, and I began to cry. The show ended just a moment too soon.Dancing stars were then replaced by a night sky's moon.An evening I'll remember, an experience like a jet,a place in my heart, this memory I won't forget. Edited January 8, 2009 at 05:37 AM by celinerific Quote http://i58.tinypic.com/2qbub9c.png @ErikaTran | Insta: aireexwp | erikatran.com
stevethefan Posted January 8, 2009 at 06:07 AM Posted January 8, 2009 at 06:07 AM Love your poem E! Quote
Davey84 Posted January 8, 2009 at 08:53 AM Posted January 8, 2009 at 08:53 AM cool! it's really nice! I don't think the 'then' in Dancing stars were then replaced by a night sky's moon. is needed Quote http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v75/daveyh84/incognito198701_zpsaaootxh1.jpgRick, ik hou van jou voor altijd!A New Day... has come 28/29 April & 2/3 May 07Antwerpen 13 et 14 mai,Paris 24 et 25 mai, Amsterdam 2 juinet Arras 7 juillet Chances Taken!!!How Do You Keep The Music Playing? - Celine Opening Night March 15th, March 16th
Terre Posted January 8, 2009 at 10:01 AM Posted January 8, 2009 at 10:01 AM Thanks for the poem. It's very nice. Quote My Taking Chances World TourAmsterdam June 2nd 2008 -Section A4, Row 7, Seat 11Stockholm June 7th 2008 -Section A8/A24, Row 3, Seat 40Helsinki June 9th 2008 -Section 119, Row 4, Seat 2 Bruce freakin' Springsteen
miel_sourit Posted January 9, 2009 at 03:39 AM Posted January 9, 2009 at 03:39 AM wow, cooolll!!!! love your poem!!! Quote http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/photos-ak-snc1/v2645/19/46/1353927048/n1353927048_30196013_7530441.jpg Visit My Website QUELLE BELLE ANGE, C'EST CELINE....JE T'AIME CELINE!!!
celinerific Posted January 9, 2009 at 04:15 AM Author Posted January 9, 2009 at 04:15 AM Thaaaanks everyone. cool! it's really nice! I don't think the 'then' in Dancing stars were then replaced by a night sky's moon. is needed If I took that out, it wouldn't follow the AA BB CC rhyming scheme. Quote http://i58.tinypic.com/2qbub9c.png @ErikaTran | Insta: aireexwp | erikatran.com
stevethefan Posted January 9, 2009 at 04:19 AM Posted January 9, 2009 at 04:19 AM Next time you should write a Celine Haiku poem. Quote
Davey84 Posted January 9, 2009 at 10:07 AM Posted January 9, 2009 at 10:07 AM Thaaaanks everyone. cool! it's really nice! I don't think the 'then' in Dancing stars were then replaced by a night sky's moon. is needed If I took that out, it wouldn't follow the AA BB CC rhyming scheme. oh well can't u change it to Dancing stars were replaced by a night sky's grey moon. or something like that? I dunno what the AA BB CC rhyming scheme is about Quote http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v75/daveyh84/incognito198701_zpsaaootxh1.jpgRick, ik hou van jou voor altijd!A New Day... has come 28/29 April & 2/3 May 07Antwerpen 13 et 14 mai,Paris 24 et 25 mai, Amsterdam 2 juinet Arras 7 juillet Chances Taken!!!How Do You Keep The Music Playing? - Celine Opening Night March 15th, March 16th
mazceline Posted January 9, 2009 at 12:11 PM Posted January 9, 2009 at 12:11 PM Erika is there no end to your talents that was real good nice one x Quote http://i16.tinypic.com/7yg8tv8.jpgSignature made by the webmiss of www.celinerific.comCeline is in 2 words MY ANGEL x x
dj4celine Posted January 10, 2009 at 03:52 AM Posted January 10, 2009 at 03:52 AM Well done, Erika! An angel sound I heard. It was her without a lie. I think you should just change the angel sound to either angel's sound or angelic sound cos it's more apt cool! it's really nice! I don't think the 'then' in Dancing stars were then replaced by a night sky's moon. is needed If I took that out, it wouldn't follow the AA BB CC rhyming scheme. I agree with Davey on that line. His suggestion to add "grey" isn't bad BTW the first stanza seems to be missing one line cos it doesn't follow the rhyming scheme Overall, great job! Quote
celinerific Posted January 10, 2009 at 04:42 AM Author Posted January 10, 2009 at 04:42 AM (edited) All your wisdom comments should have been here yesterday LOL. I handed it in today. Oh well - we'll see how it goes LOL. Cross your fingers! And MAZ! Where'd you come from? Did you rise from the dead? Where have you been for the past FOREVER?? Edited January 10, 2009 at 04:44 AM by celinerific Quote http://i58.tinypic.com/2qbub9c.png @ErikaTran | Insta: aireexwp | erikatran.com
KimboCosmo Posted January 10, 2009 at 05:19 AM Posted January 10, 2009 at 05:19 AM Really good deary!!! Quote http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/2765/48940711.png "You know you're in love when you can't fall asleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams." Visit Celinerific.com today!
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