Poem For Céline

[cmcdaori]

I remember the similar topic that was about the songs,but i think that we never did anything like this.

So,we could make one super poem together.Maybe it's stupid idea,but i made few verses already.I just got this idea in my mind.If you wrote anything i think that this is a place to show it,just show..or if your inspiration comes right now,just write.If not then we can think together.I don't know,maybe it's stupid,but it can be successful.

 

Maybe we could make a real poem,a long poem.Let everybody make his ideas and let your story be inspiration and make verses.What do you say?Then we can put all the verses into one long poem..if you're agreed with me,let's do it..

 

OK..this is sth i wrote..we dont have to put all this..just few verses...let see how it works first..

 

 

I need to express this somewhere,

I need to say that at once,

 

Cuz i'll die someday,

And everybody will remember only lies,

 

 

 

Why does everybody see me like a maniac?

Is it a sin to love?

 

To whom can i trust today?

Or just be spottering that everything is gone?

 

 

 

I cannot hold it anymore,

This is killing me,

 

Why should i hide at home?

And pis...off to be?

 

 

 

We lead only one life,

I hope you see that,

 

I don't want cry over night,

Cuz my heart will be too sad,

 

 

 

I don't care if nobody wants to see inside my soul,

Because you're blind to feel what i feel,

 

You'll never get to that goal,

So you're envious that you want the other soul to steal,

 

 

 

You never had what i have today,

You never tasted the sweetness of this love,

 

Your life be long may,

But you'll never recognize this tone,

 

 

 

No more suffering from my side,

I have her music in my ear,

 

Cuz i finally have somebody to guide,

And no more sadness,even little tear,

 

 

 

My mother passed away,

And then she suddenly appeared here,

 

Never more I thought about that painful day,

Because she...Celine Dion,forever lightened my way!!!

[Shesings2me]

Hi, I think your poem is very, very personal and so hard to add on to. I also believe that poetry is a personal form of expression and art. Your poem is powerful and tells of an obvious painful time in your life that you have moved through in part thanks to Celine. Remember, it is you that came through that time so give yourself a pat on the back and keep moving forward.

 

Thanks for sharing, Tracy

[aicee]

Cool! you're very creative.

[whineupemily]

That was amazing; i probably could never think of anything as good.

But i will keep this topic in my thoughts .. hmmm ..

 

Ahhh, i need to listen to some Celine music to get my mind flowing

(like i wasnt already) hahahha.

[Attendais]

A very moving creation... Your poem expresses fan's feeling so very well.

Thanks!

[takeachance]

Your poem was very moving and passionate. thanks for sharing. keep it up.....

[Kian]

Wow, beautiful song . I could never write something so personal and touching. You have real talent, keep up .

[cmcdaori]

Wow, beautiful song . I could never write something so personal and touching. You have real talent, keep up .

 

 

Ohh really..thank you..in any way..i like your pic..

Edited September 11, 2008 at 11:53 AM by cmcdaori

[cmcdaori]

Thank you all..i really thought we could do something together,but as some of you said,maybe it's too personal..in any way,i'd like to see some of your songs..

[cmcdaori]

A very moving creation... Your poem expresses fan's feeling so very well.

Thanks!

 

Thank you.This really comes from my soul..it is...everything is true,that's what it represents..THE TRUTH OF MY LIFE CONNECTED TO CELINE..

Edited September 11, 2008 at 11:59 AM by cmcdaori

[beautyroses]

I love your poem so much it was so touching

here is mine it is not that good,hope you like it

hey girl,don't be afraid

don't feel lonley

I am with you

and I will never leave you alone

I'll take your hand and walk with you

through your whole life

I will hug you and hold you in my hands

through your hard time

I will whisper lullabies in your ears

when you feel like to cry

and will make you smile

I will make you strong with my words

when you feel lonesome

and I will never leave you

I will fill your soul with my love

and rich your life with my heart

you'll find love with me again

you'll find god with me again

and you will never be sad anymore

cos you'll find joy with me again

and every where you look in your life

I will be there

so come with me

I am with you all the way

Edited September 15, 2008 at 07:46 AM by beautyroses

[cmcdaori]

I love your poem so much it was so touching

here is mine it is not that good,hope you like it

hey girl,don't be afraid

don't feel lonley

I am with you

and I will never leave you alone

I'll take your hand and walk with you

through your whole life

I will hug you and hold you in my hands

through your hard time

I will whisper lullabies in your ears

when you feel like to cry

and will make you smile

I will make you strong with my words

when you feel lonesome

and I will never leave you

I will fill your soul with my love

and rich your life with my heart

you'll find love with me again

you'll find god with me again

and you will never be sad anymore

cos you'll find joy with me again

and every where you look in your life

I will be there

so come with me

I am with you all the way

 

 

I liked your poem.Good start if it's your first..keep doing...you made a great poem...i really like it..thank you..

[beautyroses]

yes it is my first poem ever in my life.

I am glad you liked it

[mahyar_hajizadeh]

that was good . like it .

[Steph--xO]

cmcdaori, i think your poem is amazing. its very passionate. thanks for sharing that with us.

 

 

beautyroses, if this is your first poem, its very good for a first time, i enjoyed it.

 

 

both of you keep it up

[beautyroses]

thank you steph,

and thank you mahyar

[fyoung98]

This was a poem I wrote for Celine. I wrote it just after watching the "My Love" studio session video on Youtube.

 

I can see your pain

Yet you continue on

I could feel that you were hiding

But wanted to stay strong

In all of the interviews

I’ve ever seen you do,

outside of your professional life,

No one ever really seemed to ask about just you.

Yes, I want to know about your latest project

That is part of the business

It just seemed that there was another part of you

That was missing from the picture

We all know a picture says

the proverbial “thousand words”

While you may have said your life is good and you’re thankful (I believe you)

“There are some things that aren’t right” is what I sometimes heard.

Were the powers that be paying attention

When you expressed your desires for your life

Or did it not matter

That you were experiencing some inner strife

I watched Linda Perry’s analysis

Of the song “My Love”

If your fans had the chance to tell you

We’d say we knew it all along

We love you Celine

And appreciate all that you have given us

We also understand that you’re human

and knowing we love your music is sometimes not enough

We love YOU, Celine

not your label of singer or celebrity

certainly those are things you’re known for

but your spirit of humility is what will stand through eternity

I’ve never met you

and I don’t claim to be an expert on you

but it is not hard to see

that there is something special in you

I’m not putting you on a pedestal

for there is only One who is worthy of such

I do believe God has gifted you to us

you’ve truly been blessed by His touch

There is also the love within you

That helps you stay strong

Your critics can talk all they want

but you are right where you belong

Your voice is only one of the instruments used

To speak to the hearts of humanity

You’ve reached people of all nations

and have proven the possibility of unity

People love who you are

Because you are meek and humble

They cry and hurt with you

Pray for you through your life’s fumbles

There will always be someone who’ll stand by you

To help you “stand tall”

Even when you feel you’re all alone

Know you are not, not at all

[cmcdaori]

This was a poem I wrote for Celine. I wrote it just after watching the "My Love" studio session video on Youtube.

 

I can see your pain

Yet you continue on

I could feel that you were hiding

But wanted to stay strong

In all of the interviews

I’ve ever seen you do,

outside of your professional life,

No one ever really seemed to ask about just you.

Yes, I want to know about your latest project

That is part of the business

It just seemed that there was another part of you

That was missing from the picture

We all know a picture says

the proverbial “thousand words”

While you may have said your life is good and you’re thankful (I believe you)

“There are some things that aren’t right” is what I sometimes heard.

Were the powers that be paying attention

When you expressed your desires for your life

Or did it not matter

That you were experiencing some inner strife

I watched Linda Perry’s analysis

Of the song “My Love”

If your fans had the chance to tell you

We’d say we knew it all along

We love you Celine

And appreciate all that you have given us

We also understand that you’re human

and knowing we love your music is sometimes not enough

We love YOU, Celine

not your label of singer or celebrity

certainly those are things you’re known for

but your spirit of humility is what will stand through eternity

I’ve never met you

and I don’t claim to be an expert on you

but it is not hard to see

that there is something special in you

I’m not putting you on a pedestal

for there is only One who is worthy of such

I do believe God has gifted you to us

you’ve truly been blessed by His touch

There is also the love within you

That helps you stay strong

Your critics can talk all they want

but you are right where you belong

Your voice is only one of the instruments used

To speak to the hearts of humanity

You’ve reached people of all nations

and have proven the possibility of unity

People love who you are

Because you are meek and humble

They cry and hurt with you

Pray for you through your life’s fumbles

There will always be someone who’ll stand by you

To help you “stand tall”

Even when you feel you’re all alone

Know you are not, not at all

 

 

Oh my godness..Sth like this in my whole history i didnt see..u're sucha perfect talent i spottered.U're absolutely,even better than me.U should be a poet.Omg..sucha poem never touched me so deeply and strongly...perfect work..perfect...u really showed ur emotions..god bless ur work in future...omg..unbelievable.i'll even write this song for myself and keep it forever..omg..u impressed me a lot..i'm without words..

[kwright]

This was a poem I wrote for Celine. I wrote it just after watching the "My Love" studio session video on Youtube.

 

I can see your pain

Yet you continue on

I could feel that you were hiding

But wanted to stay strong

In all of the interviews

I’ve ever seen you do,

outside of your professional life,

No one ever really seemed to ask about just you.

Yes, I want to know about your latest project

That is part of the business

It just seemed that there was another part of you

That was missing from the picture

We all know a picture says

the proverbial “thousand words”

While you may have said your life is good and you’re thankful (I believe you)

“There are some things that aren’t right” is what I sometimes heard.

Were the powers that be paying attention

When you expressed your desires for your life

Or did it not matter

That you were experiencing some inner strife

I watched Linda Perry’s analysis

Of the song “My Love”

If your fans had the chance to tell you

We’d say we knew it all along

We love you Celine

And appreciate all that you have given us

We also understand that you’re human

and knowing we love your music is sometimes not enough

We love YOU, Celine

not your label of singer or celebrity

certainly those are things you’re known for

but your spirit of humility is what will stand through eternity

I’ve never met you

and I don’t claim to be an expert on you

but it is not hard to see

that there is something special in you

I’m not putting you on a pedestal

for there is only One who is worthy of such

I do believe God has gifted you to us

you’ve truly been blessed by His touch

There is also the love within you

That helps you stay strong

Your critics can talk all they want

but you are right where you belong

Your voice is only one of the instruments used

To speak to the hearts of humanity

You’ve reached people of all nations

and have proven the possibility of unity

People love who you are

Because you are meek and humble

They cry and hurt with you

Pray for you through your life’s fumbles

There will always be someone who’ll stand by you

To help you “stand tall”

Even when you feel you’re all alone

Know you are not, not at all

 

absolutely beautiful... you said it all