LuisMa Posted December 27, 2007 at 07:04 PM Posted December 27, 2007 at 07:04 PM (edited) Hi you all I hope you are spending some wonderful holidays with all the people you love. Earlier this year, on May 5th, the inspiration bug bit me and I wrote a song based on Celine's "On S'Est Aimé À Cause". I have been writing songs for over ten years now, but have never shared them. They have been my own prized possessions. Four months ago I went to Las Vegas to see Celine, and I wrote the lyrics I had written on a small piece of paper and had the intention to leave it on the seat with hopes it would be found and given to Celine, but then I realized that it would be a foolish idea. So I came back to Costa Rica with my tiny envelope. About two months ago I was surfing the web and found out about this page for the Paramount Group in Nashville, who are on the look for new songs and potential hits. I submitted my song, called "The Cause," and a few weeks back I received a songwriting contract, specifying that if I wanted they would add music to the lyrics and create a professional demo, and then shop it to record labels, artists or music publishers (of course I would pay for the demo). I fell ill two days later, and now that I'm back, I have decided NOT to give my song to that publisher. First, because it's based on Celine's song and I think it sounds perfect with that music, and second because I think it's my time to share it with you. Who knows if Celine will ever get to see it, but a guy can keep on dreaming . I hope you like it as much as I do, God bless you on this new year that's just around the corner, and thanks for reading and/or commenting on my post. The Cause Well I will tell the rainTo take away your painAnd I will ask the sunTo brighten up your days And I will tell the moonTo never leave you in blueAnd I will ask the springTo make your garden bloom And to the wind I'll askTo keep away the stormAnd to the embers tellTo please let the fire burn 'Cause you're my only causeThe cause, the cause, the causeWhy to the world I turnAll the things that I say Some say that I am madSome think that I'm insaneBut they can't see you're the causeAt night to God I pray And I will tell the iceTo never harden thatAmazing little thing that beats inside your chestAnd I will tell the tidesTo never wash awayThe memories we shared until it's time to rest And to the birds I'll askTo always sing your praiseAnd to the forests tellTo please shelter you in their shades 'Cause you're my only causeThe cause, the cause, the causeWhy to the world I turnAll the things that I say Some say that I am madSome think that I'm insaneBut they can't see you're the cause And I will tell the seaTo bring you safe to shoreWill ask a shooting starFor all that you wish and more 'Cause you're my only causeThe cause, the cause, the causeWhy to the world I turnAll the things that I say Some say that I am madSome think that I'm insaneBut they can't see you're the cause And to all the years gone byFor what they gave to usI'll thank for letting youAlways stay by my sideTo all the years to comeAnd all that they will giveIf you are still my causeYou'll be the cause I live Luis Manuel AcostaMay 19, 2007 and December 27, 2007 Wow the nicest thing about inspiration is that it can come at any moment. I had wanted to change the third and fourth line of the last verse, which read "I'll thank for letting me keep you by my side" but did not find the right words that fit the song perfectly, and I just did. "I'll thank for letting you always stay by my side" fit better with the song. Hope you like it and sing it with me!!!! Luis Edited December 27, 2007 at 07:06 PM by luisma4 Quote
rathnakumar Posted December 27, 2007 at 07:35 PM Posted December 27, 2007 at 07:35 PM I am soooooooooo in love with those lines! Great job, Luis!!! Quote https://www.instagram.com/p/C8RuNzZPAdh/
hidden_ego Posted December 27, 2007 at 07:54 PM Posted December 27, 2007 at 07:54 PM wow...........!!!!!!!!!!! super thanks a lot Quote
MrTim212 Posted December 27, 2007 at 08:49 PM Posted December 27, 2007 at 08:49 PM Luis, This is absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing your gift with us! -tim.=) Quote je me changerai en or pour que tu m'aimes encore
aicee Posted December 27, 2007 at 10:14 PM Posted December 27, 2007 at 10:14 PM (edited) Wow! I'm sure you're inspired to Celine when you wrote " The Cause" I used to write lyrics too and It's all dedicated to Celine. If I'm in your situation too, I would also not to give my work. Specially when it belongs to someone else you've been longing. Right! Edited December 27, 2007 at 10:15 PM by aicee Quote
celinecolombian Posted December 27, 2007 at 11:18 PM Posted December 27, 2007 at 11:18 PM WOW! I have to say that you have done an amazing job! I really love this song and your lyrics are great, thanks for doing this and sharing of course Quote
CelinesDIVO5 Posted December 27, 2007 at 11:48 PM Posted December 27, 2007 at 11:48 PM Nice job, I did the same thing with TOUS LES BLUES SONT ECRITS POUR TOI and RETIENS-MOI a few years ago Quote https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PL54qnRGM2gMatthew Charles - "Fix You" - Live at The Stonewall InnStonewall Sensation - Season 15Originally written and performed by Coldplay
peo Posted December 28, 2007 at 01:17 AM Posted December 28, 2007 at 01:17 AM Que bello!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j233/Astrid_07/DSCF4582.jpg There ain't a dream that don't have the chance to come true now, it just takes a little faith baby... Follow me on Twitter and I'll follow you: http://twitter.com/RainbowishABE
celínico_sin_remedio Posted December 28, 2007 at 02:26 AM Posted December 28, 2007 at 02:26 AM wow,what a beautiful translation!! YOU ROCK! Keep up the perfect work! Quote "No matter where you are, reach for your own star to realize the power of the dream" From miss Céline Dion to the world those with a will to listen, and not just hear
blair Posted December 28, 2007 at 04:45 AM Posted December 28, 2007 at 04:45 AM Holy cow - I love it! They're amazing Quote
Attendais Posted December 28, 2007 at 10:51 AM Posted December 28, 2007 at 10:51 AM Dute it is just BEAUUUUUUUTIFULLL!!!! C'est trop tres tres beau!!!! Where is my guitar? I'd love to play it in english.. THANKS A LOT Quote http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff31/Takin_chances/jetaimeencoresing.jpg "The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes but in having new eyes"
Esty Posted December 28, 2007 at 02:08 PM Posted December 28, 2007 at 02:08 PM It's really beautiful!!!! If Celine ever plans to make an English version of A cause, this should be the lyrics! Quote
LuisMa Posted December 28, 2007 at 08:37 PM Author Posted December 28, 2007 at 08:37 PM Thank you all for your very nice comments. Songwriting is a very nice outlet for me. I'm glad you liked the lyrics I wrote. Quote
Love, Posted December 28, 2007 at 10:59 PM Posted December 28, 2007 at 10:59 PM Very romantic and beautiful, lyrical composition! It's L O V E. :wub: Awesome job, Luis! Quote
alex_fan2valdeniz Posted December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM Posted December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM Wow, it's amazing, I love your lyrics Quote
CelineRules! Posted March 31, 2009 at 10:58 PM Posted March 31, 2009 at 10:58 PM Wow Luis.. those are great lyrics! Fits perfectly to the original music Quote
idroveallnight Posted April 1, 2009 at 04:29 AM Posted April 1, 2009 at 04:29 AM Just brilliant. Quote
angeluk2 Posted April 2, 2009 at 09:37 PM Posted April 2, 2009 at 09:37 PM OMD!!LUIS!! These lyrics are beautiful and fit the song perfectly!!! Thank you so much for posting them Quote CHOCOLATE is the answer....I don't give a damn what the question was!
ennostiel Posted April 2, 2009 at 10:01 PM Posted April 2, 2009 at 10:01 PM Love it! I sometimes write lyrics inspired by existing words & music, and sometimes just my own, but I love those lyrics of yours! They fit the music perfectly. Quote Ce n'est qu'en te croisantQue j'ai su, j'ai compris... ElleEst mon idealLa plus grande etoileEt je veux ressemblerA son portrait fidele...Celine pour toujours. <3
LuisMa Posted April 2, 2009 at 10:04 PM Author Posted April 2, 2009 at 10:04 PM Thank you guys. I love writing. I've written a lot of songs, but most of them are in Spanish. Quote
Snowhite Posted April 4, 2009 at 05:48 PM Posted April 4, 2009 at 05:48 PM i really like it too....It would be great if the english version of the song was this..You can sale it to Rene Quote
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