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Hi you all I hope you are spending some wonderful holidays with all the people you love. Earlier this year, on May 5th, the inspiration bug bit me and I wrote a song based on Celine's "On S'Est Aimé À Cause". I have been writing songs for over ten years now, but have never shared them. They have been my own prized possessions. Four months ago I went to Las Vegas to see Celine, and I wrote the lyrics I had written on a small piece of paper and had the intention to leave it on the seat with hopes it would be found and given to Celine, but then I realized that it would be a foolish idea. So I came back to Costa Rica with my tiny envelope. About two months ago I was surfing the web and found out about this page for the Paramount Group in Nashville, who are on the look for new songs and potential hits. I submitted my song, called "The Cause," and a few weeks back I received a songwriting contract, specifying that if I wanted they would add music to the lyrics and create a professional demo, and then shop it to record labels, artists or music publishers (of course I would pay for the demo). I fell ill two days later, and now that I'm back, I have decided NOT to give my song to that publisher. First, because it's based on Celine's song and I think it sounds perfect with that music, and second because I think it's my time to share it with you. Who knows if Celine will ever get to see it, but a guy can keep on dreaming ;). I hope you like it as much as I do, God bless you on this new year that's just around the corner, and thanks for reading and/or commenting on my post.

 

The Cause

 

Well I will tell the rain

To take away your pain

And I will ask the sun

To brighten up your days

 

And I will tell the moon

To never leave you in blue

And I will ask the spring

To make your garden bloom

 

And to the wind I'll ask

To keep away the storm

And to the embers tell

To please let the fire burn

 

'Cause you're my only cause

The cause, the cause, the cause

Why to the world I turn

All the things that I say

 

Some say that I am mad

Some think that I'm insane

But they can't see you're the cause

At night to God I pray

 

And I will tell the ice

To never harden that

Amazing little thing that beats inside your chest

And I will tell the tides

To never wash away

The memories we shared until it's time to rest

 

And to the birds I'll ask

To always sing your praise

And to the forests tell

To please shelter you in their shades

 

'Cause you're my only cause

The cause, the cause, the cause

Why to the world I turn

All the things that I say

 

Some say that I am mad

Some think that I'm insane

But they can't see you're the cause

 

And I will tell the sea

To bring you safe to shore

Will ask a shooting star

For all that you wish and more

 

'Cause you're my only cause

The cause, the cause, the cause

Why to the world I turn

All the things that I say

 

Some say that I am mad

Some think that I'm insane

But they can't see you're the cause

 

And to all the years gone by

For what they gave to us

I'll thank for letting you

Always stay by my side

To all the years to come

And all that they will give

If you are still my cause

You'll be the cause I live

 

Luis Manuel Acosta

May 19, 2007 and December 27, 2007

 

Wow the nicest thing about inspiration is that it can come at any moment. I had wanted to change the third and fourth line of the last verse, which read "I'll thank for letting me keep you by my side" but did not find the right words that fit the song perfectly, and I just did. "I'll thank for letting you always stay by my side" fit better with the song. ;)

Hope you like it and sing it with me!!!!

Luis

Edited by luisma4
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Luis,

 

This is absolutely beautiful.

 

Thank you for sharing your gift with us!

 

-tim.

=)

je me changerai en or pour que tu m'aimes encore

Posted (edited)
Wow! I'm sure you're inspired to Celine when you wrote " The Cause" I used to write lyrics too and It's all dedicated to Celine. If I'm in your situation too, I would also not to give my work. Specially when it belongs to someone else you've been longing. Right! :rockon: Edited by aicee
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WOW! I have to say that you have done an amazing job! I really love this song and your lyrics are great, thanks for doing this and sharing of course :thumbsup2:
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Nice job, I did the same thing with TOUS LES BLUES SONT ECRITS POUR TOI and RETIENS-MOI a few years ago

Matthew Charles - "Fix You" - Live at The Stonewall Inn

Stonewall Sensation - Season 15

Originally written and performed by Coldplay

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:wub: wow,what a beautiful translation!!

 

YOU ROCK! :thumbsup2:

 

Keep up the perfect work! :xmas_wink:

"No matter where you are, reach for your own star to realize the power of the dream"

 

From miss Céline Dion to the world those with a will to listen, and not just hear

Posted

Dute it is just

 

BEAUUUUUUUTIFULLL!!!! C'est trop tres tres beau!!!! :wub:

 

Where is my guitar? I'd love to play it in english.. :) THANKS A LOT

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff31/Takin_chances/jetaimeencoresing.jpg

 

"The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes but in having new eyes"

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It's really beautiful!!!! :wub: :wub: :wub:

If Celine ever plans to make an English version of A cause, this should be the lyrics!

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Thank you all for your very nice comments. Songwriting is a very nice outlet for me. I'm glad you liked the lyrics I wrote. :xmas_biggrin:
Posted

Very romantic and beautiful, lyrical composition! It's L O V E.

:wub: :wub: :wub:

 

Awesome job, Luis! :clap:

Posted
Wow, it's amazing, I love your lyrics :wub:
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Wow Luis.. those are great lyrics! :D

 

Fits perfectly to the original music :wub:

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OMD!!

LUIS!!

 

These lyrics are beautiful and fit the song perfectly!!! :wub:

Thank you so much for posting them :kisss:

CHOCOLATE is the answer....I don't give a damn what the question was!

 

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Love it! I sometimes write lyrics inspired by existing words & music, and sometimes just my own, but I love those lyrics of yours! They fit the music perfectly.

Ce n'est qu'en te croisant

Que j'ai su, j'ai compris...

 

Elle

Est mon ideal

La plus grande etoile

Et je veux ressembler

A son portrait fidele...

Celine pour toujours. <3

Posted

Thank you guys. :)

 

I love writing. I've written a lot of songs, but most of them are in Spanish.

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i really like it too....It would be great if the english version of the song was this..You can sale it to Rene :lol:

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