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i wrote some lyrics yesterday night and i wanted to share them with you :blushing: please tell me what you think...

 

 

I’m breathing particles of ice

While looking for the light in your eyes…

It’s the only thing left in this morbid darkness…

I’m waiting in the abyss of self knowing

For the thoughts of the unacceptable…

To sink in the inevitable of life

While you are picking the apple of temptation…

 

 

Why are you looking at me with those gentle eyes?

I would go with you until the end of the Universe

And a pace more…

I would drown in the ocean and swallow the time

To offer you its eternity

And a moment longer…

 

I would gather the ashes of our body

And I would spread it on the sky

So we could live forever through the stars…

I wonder how it would feel to hold the planets in our hands…

 

Do you think I could live knowing that you are Sun,

And I, Moon, in another galaxy?

How many light years would we have to wait

To be able to touch our lips

For a few seconds?

I guess “forever” would last

A few minutes less…

 

Dreaming in whispers?

Whisper in your dreams…

Wish for the unreachable

To reach out for your wish…

 

Hush!...the crickets are singing!

They’re gathering the silence of the night

And spreading it on the road…

Can you feel it flowing in your veins?

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted
Such beautiful words from a heart that is shattering in pain ... letting go is so very hard and takes so long ... one breath at a time ... :flowers:

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Posted
I would drown in the ocean and swallow the time

 

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THAT LINE! Thank you so much for sharing your feelings and soul to us! It takes a lot of guts, believe me , I know!

 

Joe

Posted (edited)
i'm glad you like it :blushing: Edited by raluca

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted
Wonderful...really...I love your lyrics
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