Then you look at me

[steven]

Hello ,everyone~~~

I recorded this song some days ago~~

I hope you will like it:) , and please make comments after your listening~~

Thank u so much~~~

 

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You'd better use your earphone to listen

cos when i made the effect of the song, i was listening to it by my earphone.

 

sorry for my english,lol~~~

Edited May 29, 2006 at 11:46 AM by steven

[steven]

Lyrics:

 

Then you look at me

 

Written by James Horner and Will Jennings

Produced by David Foster, James Horner and Simon Franglen

 

Laugh and cry, live and die

Life is a dream we are dreaming

Day by day I find my way

Look for the soul and the meaning

 

Then you look at me

And I always see

What I have been searching for

I'm lost as can be

Then you look at me

And I am not lost anymore

 

People run, sun to sun,

Caught in their lives ever flowing

Once begun, life goes till it's gone

We have to go where it's going

 

Then you look at me

And I always see

What I have been searching for

I'm lost as can be

Then you look at me

And I am not lost anymore

 

And you say you see

When you look at me

The reason you love life so

Though lost I have been

I find love again

And life just keeps on running

And life just keeps on running

You look at me and life comes from you

From you

[Guest Titom]

Nice! You've done a very good job!

I love your voice especialy at the begining of the song.

But, don't get me wrong, I love it until the end!

(sorry for my poor english, but it would be more easy for me to do this in french)

Bravo!!! J'adore ton interprétation et ta voix convient bien pour ce type de chanson. Et je suppose que tu travaille beaucoup ta voix parce que tu pousse très bian la note "And I am not lost anymoooooooooooooooooooooooooor". Félicitation pour ce beau travail!

 

Thank you so much, I enjoy it so very much!

Bye

[ANewDay...]

Nice! You've done a very good job!

I love your voice especialy at the begining of the song.

But, don't get me wrong, I love it until the end!

(sorry for my poor english, but it would be more easy for me to do this in french)

Bravo!!! J'adore ton interprétation et ta voix convient bien pour ce type de chanson. Et je suppose que tu travaille beaucoup ta voix parce que tu pousse très bian la note "And I am not lost anymoooooooooooooooooooooooooor". Félicitation pour ce beau travail!

 

Thank you so much, I enjoy it so very much!

Bye

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cher ami,

 

sache que tu t'exprimes très bien en ANGLAIS, à mon avis...

 

nous ne sommes pas ici pour corriger les fautes d'orthographe des membres...

 

bravo de même vouloir apprendre une autre langue; c'est si important, je crois...

 

- ANewDay...

[ANewDay...]

steven,

 

the following are my observations, based on your song...

 

- in the verse, "look for the soul and the MEANING" (add VIBRATO there)

- a wee bit shakey in the first chorus at times, but you remain composed

- much better the second time with regards to "is GOING" (the end note before the second chorus; nice use of vibrato there

- avoid breathing through vowels (HANEYMORE, rather than ANYMORE)

- try adding more vibrato

- how courageous of you to sing this song in that key; i'm quite impressed by your range, dude

- all in all, a rather, no, very good job, honestly, and what a beautiful song to sing; great choice!

- you have much talent; keep it up, and i agree with the person who says that the beginning of the song is the most solid part

 

- ANewDay...

Edited July 14, 2006 at 03:52 PM by ANewDay...

[steven]

Thank you Titom.

Thank you for being the first one here to listen to my song. Although I cannot understand your french comment , through your English words, I know here I have found a muisc friend and really thank you for giving me more courage to sing more. Thank you!

[steven]

Thank you ANewDay...

It's the second time you give me your long, as well as warm comment on my song.(The First Time is on Dance with my Father, I remember Clearly!!!)

In your words, you mentioned vibrato which I really want to add in my singing. Frankly speaking, This is not an easy thing to do , but I will try and practise more. Thank you

[celinerific]

You have a great voice I think you'd do good singing some Christmas ballads. Edited July 16, 2006 at 02:42 AM by celines_daughter

[Guest Titom]

Thank you A New Day... for giving me the will to keep myself learning english! As would says the song, "what a feeling!".. lol!!

Steven, what I just said in french was that I love the way you've done this song, that your voice was perfect to sing this kind of song and that I suppose that you probably worked hard to be able to keep a note like "and I am not lost anymoooooooooooooooooooooooore". Congratulation for this very good job!

[paradox]

steven can you upload song on http://rapidshare.de/ i have problem with dow, thx

[steven]

To Titom: lol, well "thank you" is the words I'd like say to you most.

you can also try any more ooooooooooooooooooooooo, It's not a very high key, but it's a very exciting singsing for me.

 

 

To doomqueen : I've upload the song on :

http://rapidshare.de/files/31645392/Then_y...roud_vocal_.mp3

hope you enjoy it.