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i wrote a song...and i would like u to tell me what do you think...

 

 

Fallen love

 

Refrain:

For you to learn to respect love

I’ll teach you what pain means

But not that pain you can cry

But the one that so heavy it feels…

For you to weep so badly inside,

For you to sleep just to forget

And my voice to haunt you everywhere

Cause this is what in my heart you’ve left

 

So slowly to touch your lips

And play with your mind just like u played with mine

To feel you embraced by sorrow and pain

While I’m filling your soul with this intoxicating wine

 

How naïve must I have been

To believe that love is a beautiful dream

This is a lie, there’s no truth, just tears

Tears that for you nothing mean

 

Refrain: …

 

Look at me, what I’ve become

So lost in this world that I created

I’m falling, and falling, I cannot awake

The sparkle in me has faded….

 

The taste of this love, so bitter

I want you to feel it too

Surrounded by my dark dreams

This may seem impossible, but it’s true…

 

Refrain:…

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

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OMG  :cry: its sooo sad  :cry:

 

 

well...yeah..that's my story now :down:

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted
Maybe you could sing an accapella version of this song and post the link here for everybody to listen to it and evaluate it and tell you what they think. I think the lyrics are beautiful but sad.
Posted

*sings* Ne partez pas sans moi.... (thanks 1Celine12!)

 

*hugs* Dunno what happened to you but it was obviosuly very sad :(

http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/7108/ziegfieldgirlbanner.jpg

 

Posted
I like it! :cry:

 

Beautiful Sin - My Elizabeth Perkins Website!

 

 

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v510/cathydion2/cdfsig.jpg

 

 

We might kiss when we are alone... When nobody's watching... We might take it home... We might make out... When nobody's there... It's not that we're scared... It's just that it's delicate... We might live like never before... When there's nothing to give... Well how can we ask for more... We might make love in some sacred place... The look on your face is delicate

Posted
*sings* Ne partez pas sans moi.... (thanks 1Celine12!)

 

*hugs* Dunno what happened to you but it was obviosuly very sad :(

 

 

 

You're welcome Célinefull. That's my siggy btw. That's my favourite french song from her at the moment.

Posted
*hugs* Dunno what happened to you but it was obviosuly very sad :(

 

 

thanks :blushing:

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

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