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Hello everybody! :flowers:

I wrote a song familiar to "Calling you" that's called "I'm calling you". I was inspired by Celine's song,but I guess you know that she doesn;t sing the original so i thought to write on just for her! wainting for your opinion! :innocent:

 

I'M CALLING YOU

 

1)A desert rose that blooms for regrets

A tiny rainbow that smiles through the clouds

An angel's tear that's slipping on your face

And everything that our souls bounds

 

2)An empty road that leads to nowhere

A sparkle pearl that shines through the night

And every star that makes dreams come true

All this would bring you here if they might

 

Refrain:Can't you hear my voice whispering?

I'm calling you, I'm calling you

I reach for you, but you're not there

Wher are you? I'm calling you

From everywhere

 

Falling apart on a rose yellow perfume

Tears come down defending my slavery

Of a lost reachless tiny love

Finding you was everything I need it

Missing you was everything you gave me from above

 

Refrain:...

 

1)....

 

Refrain:...

 

I hope you like it! B)

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted

:clap:

you are really good writer :thumbsup2: :in_love:

"Today, I’m a person on a path of connecting with my source and understanding that I am on the leading edge of creation.."

Posted
I really think you could write your own songs and make an album out of them.
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Vic, read me topic and tell me what you think. I started doing this song topic craze.
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I figured it would be a great idea. I wish you great luck with your musical career.
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thank you all for everything! :blushing: i should write e song for all of you :P an album with my songs? that would be so cool....especially if celine would sing them...it's good dreamin,ha?

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted
Maybe I could write the song and you could look it over and see what you think. Does that seem fair? I think it should be titled "Thank You My Dear Sweet Friends." What do you think of the title? I'll get on it right away.
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i love the song! :in_love: it's so cool! :kicking:

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

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I thought of you raluca as I was writing the song. You said that you were greatful for everything that we've done. So, I thought since I am a songwriter and am a beginner, I thought I'd try it out and it worked out good. I'm glad that you like it.
Posted
Hello everybody! :flowers:

I wrote a song familiar to "Calling you" that's called "I'm calling you". I was inspired by Celine's song,but I guess you know that she doesn;t sing the original so i thought to write on just for her! wainting for your opinion!  :innocent:

 

I'M CALLING YOU

 

1)A desert rose that blooms for regrets

A tiny rainbow that smiles through the clouds

An angel's tear that's slipping on your face

And everything that our souls bounds

 

2)An empty road that leads to nowhere

A sparkle pearl that shines through the night

And every star that makes dreams come true

All this would bring you here if they might

 

Refrain:Can't you hear my voice whispering?

I'm calling you, I'm calling you

I reach for you, but you're not there

Wher are you? I'm calling you

From everywhere

 

Falling apart on a rose yellow perfume

Tears come down defending my slavery

Of a lost reachless tiny love

Finding you was everything I need it

Missing you was everything you gave me from above

 

Refrain:...

 

1)....

 

Refrain:...

 

I hope you like it! B)

that was seriously really fantastic!! i love the was you use metaphors to describe such things it is very compassionate and well......i love it!!!! ok bye :clap: congratulations on a great song!!!!!!!!! ^_^

KRIS _da>>> kringle:D
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Wouldn't it be great if she sang it? I would fall in love if she sang it.
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Wouldn't it be great if she sang it?  I would fall in love if she  sang it.

 

 

fall in love? :lmao: that's cool..i tried to sing it like "Calling you" but i have to figure out another way to sing the refrain cause mine is longer :msn-tongue:

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

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Keep going and you will get it. Don't give up. It takes time.
Posted
it will sure that a lot of time! my sister is sick and it's contagious...i think i'll get ill too...i won't be able to sing for at least two weeks :cry:

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted
You mean practice the song? I know you will be able to sing. You have a voice of an angel. Keep working on that WONDERFUL voice.
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You mean practice the song?  I know you will be able to sing.  You have a voice  of an angel.  Keep working on that WONDERFUL voice.

 

 

thanks for the advice! :thumbsup2: i hope i won't get ill!

 

*praying not to get ill*

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

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You're very welcome for the advice. I know you won't get ill. Keep praying and your prayers will be answered. :clap:
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the words are really nice,i'd like to hear the soude also.probably or more then sure you'll be a star

i am impressed,beatiful,congratulations!!!!

 

ch

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the words are really nice,i'd like to hear the soude also.probably or more then sure you'll be a star

i am impressed,beatiful,congratulations!!!!

 

ch

 

thanks! :blushing: i love it! :P

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted
the words are really nice,i'd like to hear the soude also.probably or more then sure you'll be a star

i am impressed,beatiful,congratulations!!!!

 

ch

 

thanks! :blushing: i love it! :P

 

 

Do you mean that you LOVE being a songwriter? I LOVE being a songwriter as you do know. :flowers: :flowers:

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i meant that i love the lyrics but i love being a songwriter too! and i also love to sing! you can listen to two of my songs here: http://www.celinedionforum.com/index.php?s...ndpost&p=110007

 

enjoy! :flowers:

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

Posted (edited)
I sent you an e-mail at your yahoo address telling you what I thought about your songs. I hope to hear from you soon. Edited by 1Celine12
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I sent you an e-mail at your yahoo address telling you what I thought about your songs.  I hope to hear from you soon.

 

 

thanks for your e-mail! :flowers: i apreciate your opinion!

J'aimerais tant savoir

Souffler comme le vent

Sur ton doux visage

Faire partir le noir, disparaître le temps

Casser les nuages

Parler même tout bas

Juste pout toi et moi

De petits riens

Mais là-bas

Au loin, tu nages...

 

 

 

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That's good, it's best if you both chat by email or messenger. Topics aren't used for normal conversations. Thank you.

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Just letting raluca that she had an e-mail, that's all. It won't happen again.

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