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[raluca]

hey to all of you!
a time ago i wrote a song for Celine&Rene. i would like to know what do you think about it....perhaps i'll send it to them...who knows? together with "thank you" that i wrote for Celine.
so...here it is:

WHEN WE SURRENDER OUR HEARTS

(for Celine&Rene)

It's like hearing piano sounds
When you whisper in the night
It's like an echoe of guitars
Everytime it seems so bright

No angel touch could make it deeper
This cristalin music from your heart
No silver wings could bring you higher
You shine your love when it's too dark

Refrain:
This night we've promised each other
That we will never fall apart
It is the night when feelings matter
When we surrender our hearts.
It is forever deep and strong
This love that keeps us still alive
And that's why angels sing this song
Embracing us with an innocent life.

This violin without it's sounds
Is painting us this melody
And with the sun, the moon, and clouds
It's bringing us eternity

With time that stopped for us
We walk on roses flowers
Gliding above happiness
With tenderness that draws our colours.

Refrain:...


hope you like it! i want your sincere opinion please!

[Adam868]

My sincere opinion is that it's wonderful and I think you should send it to Celine and Rene!  She would love to know someone made a song for her.  You have great talent.

[AllCeline]

It's absolutely lovely! Maybe there's some way you coud send it to Sony or Celine? Maybe if she gets a hold of it, she may want to record it for an upcoming album... That would be wonderful.

You've done a great job! Keep up the good work!

[raluca]

AllCeline, on Jul 18 2005, 09:42 AM, said:

It's absolutely lovely! Maybe there's some way you coud send it to Sony or Celine? Maybe if she gets a hold of it, she may want to record it for an upcoming album... That would be wonderful.

You've done a great job! Keep up the good work!

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

thanks a lot!
it's my greatest dream to listen to celine singing one of my songs! perhaps in the future..who knows!

[Koolan]

It's great, now you need to find a way to send them this song. I'm surprised that Monica and Stacey have yet to comment on this?  

[VanMerlin]

It's the melody that can make or break the best of lyrics. Do you have a recording of this song or just a simple instrumental of the melody? It's very difficult to have an opinion of a song when you have only lyrics...the colours are there but the wings are missing. Know what I'm saying?

But the lyrics are very promising.

[piglot82]

Koolan, on Jul 18 2005, 08:58 PM, said:

It's great, now you need to find a way to send them this song. I'm surprised that Monica and Stacey have yet to comment on this? 

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Rene     

It is very good. You are a talented writer, I wish I could say the same for me.

[Mozinha]

I'm here Vic LOL

Wow, Raluca, it's WONDERFUL.
Yes, you MUST send this to them, they'll love it.

My suggestion? Send them in October or November, close to their anniversary. They'll love it!!!!

You must send it!!!!!!!


I must write a song for René

[tativale]

I think it's great, yet, I agree , need to know the melody of the song. The lyric is very nice!

and Yeah send it to them, send it wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

Edited by tativale, 19 July 2005 - 06:30 PM.

[Koolan]

Maybe you could send it to Stacey. The next time she goes to Vegas, could give it to Rene.    

[raluca]

a melody of the song? well the one that i have in the mind it's quite nice..but i don't now how to put it on notes..i'm not good at that that's my "weakness" i can;t play an instrument and i hate when i have a melody in mind and can't put in on notes....the only way not to forget it is to sing by time...but if anyone can do a melody..be my guest and make a demo...if it's possible record the lyrics too and send it to me or post it to see if he/she catch the feelings of the song

and yes i thought of sending the song in november to arrive til december 17th...but the only addresse i have and know it the one from the international fan club from canada..and they won't send it too celine..i'm preatty sure of that

but stacey...if you make a trip soon to vegas tell me and you could copy the lyrics or better i'll sen them with a letter to gine it to a dancer or to michel

that would be great!

so don't forget! any idea for the melody...just post it! i thought of something with piano ar only piano...something like i know what love is or the colour of my love!

[piglot82]

Well, I'm going on December 2-4, 2005 so I will be there just in time for their anniversary and I would be more than happy to deliver it for you.

Although I must warn you...When I do meet Rene I doubt my thoughts will be on the song      (J/K)

It would be really great if you were able to have the music written for it too.

I'll PM you with an address you can send it to when it gets closer to my trip if you want.

[george]

Your song is very emotional and honest...it depicts real emotions in such a nice way...I'm sure Celine we'll be moved by this beautiful lyric....You are definitely talented and don' t waste it for anything....also don't forget that dreams come true!!!!!!!!!  

[raluca]

piglot82, on Jul 21 2005, 07:31 AM, said:

Well, I'm going on December 2-4, 2005 so I will be there just in time for their anniversary and I would be more than happy to deliver it for you.

Although I must warn you...When I do meet Rene I doubt my thoughts will be on the song    (J/K)

It would be really great if you were able to have the music written for it too.

I'll PM you with an address you can send it to when it gets closer to my trip if you want.

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i'd love that!
and i also think that if i can't put the lyrics on a melody til then,celine will still be touched

[Mozinha]

I really hope you can make it, Stacy!!!!

I love the fact that Raluca just wrote this from her heart, her feelings, not having a just a plan to get Celine's attention, like so many people out there do.
I congratulate you for that.

[nano]

Woow..raluca your lyrics are amazing    Celine and Rene would love this..
This song really shows their love

I've done some (incomplete)songs...or mostly just the melodies.. It so easy to make the first verse or the intro...but for me the finnishing is endless    I have right now 3 or 4 songs without endings    someday I'm gonna finnish those...    ..or not

[raluca]

Mozinha, on Jul 22 2005, 09:15 AM, said:

I really hope you can make it, Stacy!!!!

I love the fact that Raluca just wrote this from her heart, her feelings, not having a just a plan to get Celine's attention, like so many people out there do.
I congratulate you for that.

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thanks!
to be honest with you,when i started writting almost two years ago,i started cause i wanted to "get" to celine through them....
but with time...writting songs became part of me and i really don't think like at the beginning...the songs that i write now are more emotional because i gave up to that stupid ambition of using my talent...now it's like a dream..a way to express myself without hurting anyone,and if i write songs now for celine or others that are close to her,is because i love her,not because i want to get her attention
and if celine would someday sing some of them,it would be a dream come true

[raluca]

nano, on Jul 22 2005, 09:26 AM, said:

Woow..raluca your lyrics are amazing   Celine and Rene would love this..
This song really shows their love

I've done some (incomplete)songs...or mostly just the melodies.. It so easy to make the first verse or the intro...but for me the finnishing is endless   I have right now 3 or 4 songs without endings   someday I'm gonna finnish those...   ..or not

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you are exactly the oposite of me it's hard for me to start write a song(sometimes i write the refrain first) not to end it..though "thank you",that i wrote for celine, took a few hours til i wrote the ending...cause i couldn't find the words
why not try to mend the songs you've already done   who knows?

[mattia]

everybody wrote, so i don't want to sound nerd,but it's really really really a grat song..i mean, great lyrics..i wish she''ll recorde it..i think it would be your greates reward,isn't it?great job..

[raluca]

giusi, on Jul 23 2005, 12:23 AM, said:

everybody wrote, so i don't want to sound nerd,but it's really really really a grat song..i mean, great lyrics..i wish she''ll recorde it..i think it would be your greates reward,isn't it?great job..

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it would indeed be my greatest reward

[raluca]

just got a great idea!
wouldn't it be nice if i would sent also "thank you"? i mean if stacey will be able to give the songs to rene or michel or some of the dancers,celine would get this song too...written especially for her from us the fans!
i think i found someone who can help me with the melodie,also a celine fan,so perhaps til november the melodies will be ready and with a little bit of luck i'll be able to record a demo of the songs...if i manage,i'll post them to hear your opinion


stacey,what do you say? would you like to deliver both songs?

[piglot82]

not a problem.  I'll do my best to deliver them to her.

[godessceline]

Raluca, well done! It really is very good indeed!  

[fred]

raluca, on Jul 17 2005, 10:15 PM, said:

hey to all of you!
a time ago i wrote a song for Celine&Rene. i would like to know what do you think about it....perhaps i'll send it to them...who knows? together with "thank you" that i wrote for Celine.
so...here it is:

WHEN WE SURRENDER OUR HEARTS

(for Celine&Rene)

It's like hearing piano sounds
When you whisper in the night
It's like an echoe of guitars
Everytime it seems so bright

No angel touch could make it deeper
This cristalin music from your heart
No silver wings could bring you higher
You shine your love when it's too dark

Refrain:
This night we've promised each other
That we will never fall apart
It is the night when feelings matter
When we surrender our hearts.
It is forever deep and strong
This love that keeps us still alive
And that's why angels sing this song
Embracing us with an innocent life.

This violin without it's sounds
Is painting us this melody
And with the sun, the moon, and clouds
It's bringing us eternity

With time that stopped for us
We walk on roses flowers
Gliding above happiness
With tenderness that draws our colours.

Refrain:...


hope you like it! i want your sincere opinion please!

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Well I am mostly very negative to everything, even lyrics written by professionals. But this part is actually really good, and make me feel wow while my eyes were hurrying over:

"... This night we've promised each other
That we will never fall apart
It is the night when feelings matter
When we surrender our hearts. ..."

Congrats to that fine work of art  



/fred

[sge]

Talent!

Just record a demo and deliver it to Celine & Rene!

[raluca]

a girl is working at the melody for "thank you" and and i'll ask her to make one for this song too. and we will make a demo and send them to stacey to give them to someone to deliver it to celine hope she'll get it!

[raluca]

fred, on Jul 26 2005, 09:22 AM, said:

Well I am mostly very negative to everything, even lyrics written by professionals. But this part is actually really good, and make me feel wow while my eyes were hurrying over:

"... This night we've promised each other
That we will never fall apart
It is the night when feelings matter
When we surrender our hearts. ..."

Congrats to that fine work of art 



/fred

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thanks! i never thought that this song will impress a bit people like you..at leat a part of it. you made me proud.

[fred]

raluca, on Jul 28 2005, 07:09 PM, said:

fred, on Jul 26 2005, 09:22 AM, said:

Well I am mostly very negative to everything, even lyrics written by professionals. But this part is actually really good, and make me feel wow while my eyes were hurrying over:

"... This night we've promised each other
That we will never fall apart
It is the night when feelings matter
When we surrender our hearts. ..."

Congrats to that fine work of art 



/fred

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thanks! i never thought that this song will impress a bit people like you..at leat a part of it. you made me proud.

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Oh, you're so very welcome

But wait a minute, WHAT excatly is 'people like me'?

We'll go on and be proud, you've created it from inside. No one forced you from outside. So really the only thanks you should direct is towards your own creativity.

/fred

[raluca]

fred, on Jul 29 2005, 08:36 AM, said:

raluca, on Jul 28 2005, 07:09 PM, said:

fred, on Jul 26 2005, 09:22 AM, said:

Well I am mostly very negative to everything, even lyrics written by professionals. But this part is actually really good, and make me feel wow while my eyes were hurrying over:

"... This night we've promised each other
That we will never fall apart
It is the night when feelings matter
When we surrender our hearts. ..."

Congrats to that fine work of art 



/fred

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

thanks! i never thought that this song will impress a bit people like you..at leat a part of it. you made me proud.

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Oh, you're so very welcome

But wait a minute, WHAT excatly is 'people like me'?

We'll go on and be proud, you've created it from inside. No one forced you from outside. So really the only thanks you should direct is towards your own creativity.

/fred

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  through people like you i say people that are negative about almost everything like you said you are