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My Poem I wrote for Celine for her BirthdayTell me what ya think:)


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Hi Everyone:) I made A Celine Dion Birthday Video, and I'm going to put it on YouTube, but I wrote her a poem and put it in my video, so I just wanted to see how you all liked it, I haven't put it on YouTube yet, I'm going to on March 30th:) Please tell me if you like it, I worked hard on it, Thank you:)

As Beautiful As Celine



An Exquisite Flower
to the love of a rose
could not compare to
the love I love the
most...

Your voice is so soothing,
like soft rain on my roof,
more beautiful than the
ocean's call, its so pure it
inspires us all...

A Winter snow, the
orange of Autumn, and
the beauty of Spring
could not be as beautiful
as Celine

Caring a gentle, your
words make me high,
your smile can take
away the pain
I feel inside. When
I see you my emotions
can't hide...

You give me
hope, you make
me believe, and
someday I
know that I
will meet you...

A Winter snow, the
orange of Autumn, and the
beauty of Spring, could
not be as beautiful as you,
Celine


   The Greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to Love and be Loved in return.

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:wow:

Beautiful!!!! Definitely read-worthy :-D

How long did it take you to write that?? :)

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Thank you so much :D
I think It took me about 2 or 3 weeks maybe, I love to write,  so Iv written a lot of poems:)
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I love to write also! Not poetry, but I'm good at writing narratives, and essays for English ^_^ if you ever need help on writing a poem or story, I'm the person to ask! :-D

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♥ Falling Into You ♥ Dion Chante Plamondon ♥


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wo0ow that is SOOOOOOO great. thx for sharing this beautifull poem with others...!

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View Postvolleyceline, on Mar 22 2011, 10:44 PM, said:

I love to write also! Not poetry, but I'm good at writing narratives, and essays for English ^_^ if you ever need help on writing a poem or story, I'm the person to ask! :-D

Ok :), I might have to do that sometime, Because I’m not that great with grammar:) Lol, I am also writing a Narrative, Its Called "Broken Wings" That is if I don't change it :-D Lol
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View Postghazal, on Mar 23 2011, 08:36 AM, said:

wo0ow that is SOOOOOOO great. thx for sharing this beautifull poem with others...!

Thank You  :)
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I got goosebumps when I read it, so that says enough ;-) Very beautiful and good written!!!
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View PostCelineDork14, on Mar 23 2011, 03:26 PM, said:

Hi Everyone:) I made A Celine Dion Birthday Video, and I'm going to put it on YouTube, but I wrote her a poem and put it in my video, so I just wanted to see how you all liked it, I haven't put it on YouTube yet, I'm going to on March 30th:) Please tell me if you like it, I worked hard on it, Thank you:)

As Beautiful As Celine
An Exquisite Flower
to the love of a rose
could not compare to
the love I love the
most...

Your voice is so soothing,
like soft rain on my roof,
more beautiful than the
ocean's call, its so pure it
inspires us all...

A Winter snow, the
orange of Autumn, and
the beauty of Spring
could not be as beautiful
as Celine

Caring a gentle, your
words make me high,
your smile can take
away the pain
I feel inside. When
I see you my emotions
can't hide...

You give me
hope, you make
me believe, and
someday I
know that I
will meet you...

A Winter snow, the
orange of Autumn, and the
beauty of Spring, could
not be as beautiful as you,
Celine


Hi  :)

Beautiful poem  :flowers:

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OMG OMG OMGOMGOMGOMG that is soooooooooooooo amazing...I am happy to know that I am not the only one who writes poetry for/to her...yayyayyayyayyay I am not the only one...woo hoo!!!!
Way to go!!!
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View PostMarijn_7, on Mar 24 2011, 10:14 AM, said:

I got goosebumps when I read it, so that says enough ;-) Very beautiful and good written!!!

Thank You soooo much:) I worked hard on it, so I'm glad people like it :)
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BRILLIANT!!!!!!
OMD ITSS SOO FREAKIN GOOD!!!!!

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View Postcelinemaniacaik, on Mar 26 2011, 05:08 AM, said:

BRILLIANT!!!!!!
OMD ITSS SOO FREAKIN GOOD!!!!!

Thank you  :)
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