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[erikppp]

I am a Quebec born artist. At 23 years old I am getting ready to present my first official release ''Come clean as I am'' in 2008. I wrote all the lyrics on this album with the execption of Let It Rain.

This song was originally released by Amanda Marshall in the 90's but with the help of beat producer VTZ, I am trying to bring this song into the new millennium. Keep in mind this a demo. This is far from being the final product. I am not collecting any royalties on this as it has not been released yet.

Have fun listening! If you have any comments please send them to: comments@erik.qc.tc
Click here to listen !

[sylvio15]

Bad. I didn't like it.

Sorry,
Good luck!

Hugs!

[celinemanic]

I really liked the music, but you have performing difficulties. I think you had not put your soul into your singing. I am sorry, but I didn't really enjoyed it. You will have to try harder...

[erikppp]

I must react to some comments:

I really refuse to argue over taste,not liking the song is ok with me. My music is not meant to appeal to the celine fan that I am (overplaying all the emotions, acting) This project is very personal. As I said this is a home made demo that absolutly does not represent the emotion I can put into my voice. Saying I have performing difficulties is ridiculous ! Justen listen to the bootleg live version of ''home'' on myspace !

''trying harder'' will happen in studio, as the the track will be correctly mixed.

Thank you though for your input, I always keep all good critisicm in min.

[celinemanic]

I just wrote about difficulties not that you are completely unable to sing. Don't take that hard my words. In my own humble opinion you really need to do a lot of work and I am sorry if my words hurt you but that's what I feel. By the way, Home is better. It is a good effort indeed...

[sylvio15]

Please! Don't be rude. You've asked our opnion... and we give it.

I agree with CELINEMANIC... You have problems in your singin... like semitonations... your 'melismas' are bad... your timbre are not so good for me...

And that version you called 'live'... it's not live. I'm a singer and producer... and I know you put some 'audience sound' in your recording...

Who did you try to cheat???

[erikppp]

sylvio15, on Dec 5 2007, 04:56 PM, said:

Please! Don't be rude. You've asked our opnion... and we give it.

I agree with CELINEMANIC... You have problems in your singin... like semitonations... your 'melismas' are bad... your timbre are not so good for me...

And that version you called 'live'... it's not live. I'm a singer and producer... and I know you put some 'audience sound' in your recording...

Who did you try to cheat???

THIS IS CRAZY !!!!! first of all I am not rude ! and ''home'' is live ! your nuts to pretend such things. If I were rich I would sue you for difamation of character as I am not i'll just say you shoudn't use this example to prove you are a producer ! people will laugh at you when I show them the video.

Come on you say it youself I asked for feedback why would I be rude ! Ii have the right though to defend my product though.

[sylvio15]

erikppp, on Dec 5 2007, 11:14 PM, said:

sylvio15, on Dec 5 2007, 04:56 PM, said:

Please! Don't be rude. You've asked our opnion... and we give it.

I agree with CELINEMANIC... You have problems in your singin... like semitonations... your 'melismas' are bad... your timbre are not so good for me...

And that version you called 'live'... it's not live. I'm a singer and producer... and I know you put some 'audience sound' in your recording...

Who did you try to cheat???

THIS IS CRAZY !!!!! first of all I am not rude ! and ''home'' is live ! your nuts to pretend such things. If I were rich I would sue you for difamation of character as I am not i'll just say you shoudn't use this example to prove you are a producer ! people will laugh at you when I show them the video.

Come on you say it youself I asked for feedback why would I be rude ! Ii have the right though to defend my product though.

Please!!!

I'm dying to watch this video... hahaha... Post it here and now!  

Really... YOU are crazy... and you are a really bad person. I just feel sorry about you...  

FIRST: This is not live because I have the playback you used in this recording.
SECOND: You have used a reverb to simulate a live show... and you     didn't trick me... really man...  
THIRD: This aplause sound are too false... really man... you didn't trick me...

Please... just be sincere... just be truth guy...

You're not a really bad singer... but you're not a good singer too...  

Bye! Kisses...

[sylvio15]

Just one thing.

YOU SAID:
"As I said this is a home made demo that absolutly does not represent the emotion I can put into my voice."

Please, listen to me in my project. Everything (since my voice until playback) was home-made.

Tell me what you think... please... listen the WHOLE recording!!!

LINK: http://www.4shared.c...o_una_foto.html

[damdion]

Hey Eric!

i liked the melody of music, truth!

Only you need further improve its interpretation. If deliver more, have more feeling when
singing.

But I liked!

Keep paraticing, man...

Hugs,

Damdion. L.V

[peo]

sylvio15, on Dec 5 2007, 04:56 PM, said:

Please! Don't be rude. You've asked our opnion... and we give it.

I agree with CELINEMANIC... You have problems in your singin... like semitonations... your 'melismas' are bad... your timbre are not so good for me...

And that version you called 'live'... it's not live. I'm a singer and producer... and I know you put some 'audience sound' in your recording...

Who did you try to cheat???

Your a singer and producer at age 18???    

[sylvio15]

peo, on Dec 6 2007, 08:29 AM, said:

sylvio15, on Dec 5 2007, 04:56 PM, said:

Please! Don't be rude. You've asked our opnion... and we give it.

I agree with CELINEMANIC... You have problems in your singin... like semitonations... your 'melismas' are bad... your timbre are not so good for me...

And that version you called 'live'... it's not live. I'm a singer and producer... and I know you put some 'audience sound' in your recording...

Who did you try to cheat???

Your a singer and producer at age 18???    

Yes... why not? Just listen to one of my productions in the link above...

The song is called 'Ti scatterò una foto'... from Tiziano Ferro. It's me singin'... and I was the instrumental producer... and a friend Catselidis played guitars acoustic and eletric. This playback are not in the web... because I made it...

If you're doubt about that... Let me know. I show you other productions that I made...


Hugs!

Edited by sylvio15, 06 December 2007 - 07:00 AM.

[erikppp]

I don't want this to turn into a debate , you are right on one pointe sylvio: the music we here is playback , I always use playback to sing live to save on the cost
of having musicians . For the rest I refuse to argue with you and REFUSE to listen to your song as the <<bad>> person I am. I have nothing to <<prove>> to you (whoever you are)

Also how about you open a topic where people can argue about you being a producer ? This is my song's topic not a forum to discuss your <<talents>>.

Damdion:  thank you for your feedback it is truly appreciated and in studio I will work on the raw emotion of this song . Take care...

[sylvio15]

Great!

It's finished.

Good look.