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[steven]

Hello ,everyone~~~
I recorded this song some days ago~~
I hope you will like it:)  , and please make comments after your listening~~
Thank u so much~~~

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Remarks: You'd better use Flashget to download:)
You'd better use your earphone to listen
cos when i made the effect of the song, i was listening to it by my  earphone.

sorry for my english,lol~~~

Edited by steven, 29 May 2006 - 05:46 AM.

[steven]

Lyrics:

Then you look at me

Written by James Horner and Will Jennings
Produced by David Foster, James Horner and Simon Franglen

Laugh and cry, live and die
Life is a dream we are dreaming
Day by day I find my way
Look for the soul and the meaning

Then you look at me
And I always see
What I have been searching for
I'm lost as can be
Then you look at me
And I am not lost anymore

People run, sun to sun,
Caught in their lives ever flowing
Once begun, life goes till it's gone
We have to go where it's going

Then you look at me
And I always see
What I have been searching for
I'm lost as can be
Then you look at me
And I am not lost anymore

And you say you see
When you look at me
The reason you love life so
Though lost I have been
I find love again
And life just keeps on running
And life just keeps on running
You look at me and life comes from you
From you

[ANewDay...]

Titom, on Jun 18 2006, 01:04 PM, said:

Nice! You've done a very good job!
I love your voice especialy at the begining of the song.
But, don't get me wrong, I love it until the end!
(sorry for my poor english, but it would be more easy for me to do this in french)
Bravo!!! J'adore ton interprétation et ta voix convient bien pour ce type de chanson. Et je suppose que tu travaille beaucoup ta voix parce que tu pousse très bian la note "And I am not lost anymoooooooooooooooooooooooooor". Félicitation pour ce beau travail!

Thank you so much, I enjoy it so very much!
Bye

<{POST_SNAPBACK}>

cher ami,

sache que tu t'exprimes très bien en ANGLAIS, à mon avis...

nous ne sommes pas ici pour corriger les fautes d'orthographe des membres...

bravo de même vouloir apprendre une autre langue; c'est si important, je crois...

- ANewDay...

[ANewDay...]

steven,

the following are my observations, based on your song...

- in the verse, "look for the soul and the MEANING" (add VIBRATO there)
- a wee bit shakey in the first chorus at times, but you remain composed
- much better the second time with regards to "is GOING" (the end note before the second chorus; nice use of vibrato there
- avoid breathing through vowels (HANEYMORE, rather than ANYMORE)
- try adding more vibrato
- how courageous of you to sing this song in that key; i'm quite impressed by your range, dude
- all in all, a rather, no, very good job, honestly, and what a beautiful song to sing; great choice!
- you have much talent; keep it up, and i agree with the person who says that the beginning of the song is the most solid part

- ANewDay...  

Edited by ANewDay..., 14 July 2006 - 09:52 AM.

[steven]

Thank you Titom.
Thank you for being the first one here to listen to my song. Although I cannot understand your french comment , through your English words, I know here I have found a muisc friend and really thank you for giving me more courage to sing more. Thank you!

[steven]

Thank you ANewDay...
It's the second time you give me your long, as well as warm  comment on my song.(The First Time is on Dance with my Father, I remember Clearly!!!)  
In your words, you mentioned vibrato which I really want to add in my singing. Frankly speaking, This is not an easy thing to do , but  I will try and practise more.  Thank you

[celinerific]

You have a great voice   I think you'd do good singing some Christmas ballads.  

Edited by celines_daughter, 15 July 2006 - 08:42 PM.

[paradox]

steven can you upload song on http://rapidshare.de/ i have problem with dow, thx

[steven]

To Titom: lol, well "thank you" is the words I'd like say to you most.
you can also try any more ooooooooooooooooooooooo, It's not a very high key, but it's a very exciting singsing for me.


To doomqueen : I've upload the song on :
http://rapidshare.de...roud_vocal_.mp3
hope you enjoy it.