ANewDay..., on Jul 17 2006, 10:43 AM, said:
this time, your song works; bravo for that!
here are my observations as i listen to your song for the very first time:
- the beginning is very, very nice in terms of tone, pitch
- emotion and believing the song are other strengths of this performance
- weaknesses, for me, would be your accent, which i'm certain you can improve
- the ECHO effect you added to your song is a bit annoying if you listen carefully; i don't think you needed that
- in short, this performance is more on the EXCELLENT side
- this is one of my favourite CELINE songs, and you pulled it off so well
- keep up your excellent work!
- ANewDay...
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did you notice MY critique?
again, i was quite impressed, and yes, you sound considerably like CELINE, which comes as no suprise to me, well, maybe a bit because i do find that impressive and admirable...
keep sharing your songs; but you really connected well to this song, and i was very impressed by what you've done here...
- ANewDay (for the second time)
p.s.: try noticing not only the negative comments, but also the positive ones; this is important, trust me!