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Latura noastra poeticaDaca va omoara talentul ...


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inseamna ca nu mai stiu eu romaneste...apusul si rasaritul nu "e" incremenite, ele "e" ciclice si ce e acum este oricum in miscare si implica ideea de viitor.
apusul si rasaritul, indiferent daca sunt acum, au fost sau vor fi....vin...din pacate...oricat ai incerca sa faci din ea o licenta poetica, e un dezacord gramatical.

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Mai, copilasi, haideti sa va impace Asi pe amandoi   :kicking:  :innocent:

Daca o sa ajungeti intr-un final sa va hotarati asupra lui "vin" putem face asa:

Sa crezi ca poti pasi mai departe,
Sa crezi ca inca mai exista un maine,
Insemana sa faci sa rasune din soapte
Ecouri care sa invie vechile ruine.

Si printre ploi de lacrimi si suspine
Sa poti vedea apusul si rasaritul care vin
Inseamna sa redai eroului din tine
Speranta si curajul unui suflet plin.


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Ce nu-ti convine, Alex, ca eu tot nu pricep? E atat de greu sa inelegi ca aici nu e vorba de ciclu sau enumeratie? este privit un singr moment. oprim timpul daca vrei. Sa poti sa vezi si apusul, dar si RASARITUL care VINE dupa el (e mai clar asa?). Si cum vad ca esti un expert atat in gramatca, cat si in poetica, te rog frumos sa continui tu poezia. eu nu voi mai continua aici.
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